Chain Story - Anyone fancy a go??

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TheMog
Dan was paralysed with fear and before he knew it he was grabbed and thrown into the building by the tall figure. He sat there in complete disbelief and kept saying "why why why?" to the tall figure.

"Did you think you'd get away with it?" Said the tall, dark shadow, cowering over Dan.

Dan kept his gaze on the shadowy figure without blinking. Although his hands were violently shaking as he gripped the small, sharp object in his hand - a shard of metal he'd found on the floor.

"Get away with what?" said Dan.
Posted: 2007-08-13 10:44:40
potclover
"I know what you did last month" the darkened stranger.
"I Haven't done nothing i don't know you" Dan cried as he nelt down to leannes side.
"Don't play inoccent with me, i know everything, and i've come for revenge," The voice said angryly.
"Its time for you to face ..........
Posted: 2007-08-13 20:35:10
All In London
....."breakfast's ready.... Dan"

"Wake up Dan, wake up". Said Dan's mum whilst placing his cup of tea on his desk. "Leanne's here, you need to pack the car or you'll miss the ferry."

"Just a bad dream" Dan thought to himself, he was finding it difficult to sleep after what he had witnessed the week before. The holiday should sort it out he thought to himself and rushed out of bed to start packing.
Posted: 2007-08-14 14:54:52
lozbbe69
Although Dan still felt very shook up about his dream he decided to forget about it and look forward to the holiday with his friends. The car journey to the ferry was cheerful and Dan soon forgot about his dream.

They all slept on the ferry and before Dan knew it had reached their destination. As he hauled his bags off the ferry he breathed a sigh of relief. His surroundings were nothing like his dream although the island still seemed quite quiet with only a few inhabitants and again, nobody but them disembarking the ferry.

A strange looking man strode up to the group, he had a wierd look about him which made the girls feel uneasy. Yet Dan was sure it was the face he saw in his dream last night, the face that had stabbed Leanne to her death...
Posted: 2007-08-14 20:22:00
Nadia86
Dan had a shiver down his spine, the strange man said, 'good journey?' looking straight at Dan with a serious look on his face.......
Posted: 2007-08-14 21:04:37
potclover
Dan took a fast step backwards. He reconised the face but couldn't place it but he was sure it was one he shouldn't trust. This man was.....
Posted: 2007-08-14 22:21:56
Aly
... carrying what looked like a petrol can, but it had the words "S T Y L L" written across it. The grubby looking man must have noticed Dan looking at the can as he said in his gravelly voice, "Some spare wood that needs burning up near where I'm staying. Should be out by now." Dan looked up and saw smoke floating up lazily in the distance. Not wanting to stand too long with this strange man with whom he had an instictive bad feeling about, he turned to his companions and said, "Shall we find a spot then?" They all nodded and as Mike led the girls off further into the Island, Dan looked at the man, who seemed not to have taken his gaze off him, held out his hand and said "See you around, er..."
"Jack."
"See you around Jack." Dan shuck his sweaty, oily hand and started to head off behind Beth, Leanne and Mike. He then turned back to the man and said, "Sorry, I didn't introduce myself. My name's..."
"Daniel. I know." And with that the man truned and stomped away...
Posted: 2007-08-14 23:17:19
lozbbe69
Dan took a while to compose himself. He simply stood there, watching this peculiar man walk away into the distance... It was only after Mike had shouted a couple of times that Dan realised what he was doing. He quickly turned and ran after the others. He decided it was best not to tel his friends, the last thing he wanted to do was ruin their holiday.
Posted: 2007-08-15 15:36:26
potclover
Leanne had sensed that there was something up with this man. She ddn't like him at all and he had seemed to upset. But this was the least ofher worries because as soon as they arrived on the island there was a humongas....
Posted: 2007-08-15 20:26:26
lozbbe69
...field. Just infront of it was a sign which said 'capsite: for visitors'
When the four friends booked this holiday they had expected there to be hundreds of people there age just wanting to come here for a few days to relax, but the field was deserted. There was not even one tent. This made the girls even more nervous and the boys looked tentaively sideways at each other. Dan decided to break the ice and said.. 'well, erm... shall we set up then?'

As they walked through the field they all felt an icy chill go up there spine, Beth quivered with unease, this island was getting more and more peculiar...
Posted: 2007-08-17 01:00:04
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