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potclover
As they walked through the feild Leanne felt something on her foot! It was beginning to rain.
They are sighed, their first day on this weird island and it rains. But Beth wasn't intrested in it raining when she saw something flash infront of her. She ran towards it. Dan, Leanne and Mike Looked at her. She looked crazy. Mike ran after her! Shesuddenly stopped. She Stared Down. Then like lightening she was.....
Posted: 2007-08-17 12:29:41
Aly
...struck down, buckling at the knees and falling with a sudden thud to the ground. Mike knelt down next to Beth and stared at her from head to foot. He was dumbfounded. Beth started to shake uncontrolably.
"What's happening to her?" Leanne shuddered as she reached Mike. "Beth? BETH? Beth, what's wrong?"
But Beth continued to shake. White, frothy liquid was protuding from her mouth. Her eyes were flikering and they began to roll back into her head. Beads of sweat appeared on her brow.
"We... we need to get her help." Said Dan with a hard swallow.
"From who? There isn't anyone on this damn island apart from us!" Shouted Mike.
"There's sure to be another boat come soon." Said Dan, looking behind him back to the sea. "Lets take her to the edge of the island and wait".
"She's feverish Dan, we need to see to her straight away. I say we set up the tent and keep her cool." Said Leanne, and after getting the nodd from the boys, she took off her rucksack and pulled out a cloth. "I'll be back in a minute." And she headed towards the sea.
Posted: 2007-08-19 17:24:36
potclover
As she walked to the sea, she thought of the events that had just happened, it was so strange she had a dream the night before. The 4 of them had arrived on the island and had been walking along the beach and all of a sudden somone had caught hold of her, she had tried to see her kidnapper but it was pitch black. In the distance she had heard Dan calling her into the night. But The Kidnapper by then had covered her eyes with a black cloth and put they're hand over her mouth. She tried to scream all it successed in was making her kidnapper press harder against her mouth. She kicked and screamed but it was useless. All of a sudden she fell on to a big beach rock. She had knocked herself out.
Her dream had then carried on but she had been in a hut, which had surrondings tree's all around. She had a piece of cloth tided around her mouth to stop her speaking and her hands were tide together. She looked around her. It was black but she could make 2 figures, one was lying on the floor and one was standing by the wall, the closest to her. She looked closer at the figure lying on the floor. This body belonged to Beth! She had white frothy stuff coming out of her month like Leanne had just seen!
Terror ran through her, she silently screamed, the pain of a person so close to her dying swept over her. She began to cry. She looked at the other person. She had almost forgotten about him as difficult it was. Was it him that had done this? What was he going to do with her. Her Kidnapper turned towards her and walked towards her with a limp almost. This person had a cigarette in their hand. She saw the face and she
did not reconise it but it belong to a women. She spoke
" I would not try and shout missy otherwise, i will have to kill you more quicker" She said. the voice was bery calming, it was a scotish accent. The person turned away, then with a bang someone crashed through the door which Leanne could identify now. Then she had wooken up from her dream without seeing the persons face. She knelt down by the sea. It was sun set. This island was sertaintly strange she washed the cloth and ruhed back tot the tent. Which was now set up she ran forward. Dan and Mike were in the tent kneeling by Beth. Mike had tears in his eyes. Dan was as pale as a ghost. Leanne asked
"Is she okay"
Dan answered " We don't know shes stop shaking but we don't know what this white stuff is thats coming out of her mouth. She still has a tempreture."
Leanne knelt down towards her, she pressed the cloth against her face, as if Beth knew it was Leanne. Her eyes looked upon Leanne and shoke like crazy!
Leanne Stepped backwards
Mike called to Beth
"Whats a matter"
Beth pointed again to Leanne but then her eyes fell to Dan Then she let out a scream.
Dan painiced
" WHAT WHAT WHAT IS IT"
Mike who was looking terribly worried by now said.
"Look you two go outside the tent and i'll try and look after her"
Dan headed out the tent, He grabbed hold of Leannes hand. She walked with him henstily. She was worried. Was her dream something to do with this.
Meanwhile back in the tent Mike tried to calm down Beth.
He cried
"Shhhhhhhhhhhhhh babe, I'm here"
Beths eyes glard to him. She insently feel quiet.
"Thats right," He said.
"Its alright they won't halm you, they're your dear friends, they love you and you love them"
Beth opened to her mounth as if to say something but instead, Threw up everywhere. She coughed.
She finally said whilst out of breath as if she had been sprinting.
"He comes"
Then fell back.
Mike shivvered
He shouted " BETH, BETH, BETH!!!!!!!!!!!!"
He cried on her shoulder. He could still hear a heart beat. At least.
He sat in silence for half an hour.
There was a little cough. Beth opened her eyes and said
"what am i doing in her?"
Mike cried with joy!!!!!
"What, What Happened??" She asked again.
She looked so confused.
With such a relifed look. Mike began to tell her what had happened to her.
She stared with such confusion.
Leanne and Mike rentered the tent.
Beth smiled at them both.
Leanne still clearly worried was hesentent towards her and stood beside Dan. Who asked how she was.
"I'm okay, tired and weak but i'll live, I'm just confused you see because i can't remember anything, All i remember is hearing all around me and thinking
"He Comes"
Mike suddenly said " I think, you should get some sleep and we'll figure it out in the morning"
Mike kissed Beth on the forhead and headed out the tent. Dan gave a sympanthetic look to her and followed.
Leanne looked at Beth. Why was this so familar?
Beth looked at Leanne and said " Don't you dare tell them anything because you know as well as i do your in the same postion as me"
Leanne looked scared
"No Of course not but it was scary"
"Nothing we can do, we just know and we can't do anything about it. We'll get through it"
Leanne exited the tent still in deep thought.
Dan and Mike were sitting down playing cards, clearly relieved but Leanne sensed she had just destirbed a deep conversation between the pair. She looked at Dan who looed worried.
"I'm going to bed" She gave a week smile and headed back tot eh tent and unravled her sleeping bag. She did of course not fall asleep but lay awake in silence all night.
Eventually she woke up to hear Mike cooking bacon. She heard the ocean in the distance. Dan who was lying next to her, was awake but lookign on his mobile. She thought
theres nothing i can do best thing to do is forget it, put it out of my mind and with that she got up and helped Mike with the breakfeast.
Posted: 2007-08-19 19:15:01
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